I've decided to look over my desert of colours scene because I'm not too happy with the composition, I think it's abit boring and needs to be mixed up more. Here are just some quick studies in grey to see what it could look like.
This is my earlier painting that I edited abit more and changed the hills around after taking Phil's advice.
This painting I did from scratch rather than trying to polish up my painting before I thought it might be best to start again. I want my drawing to have alot more depth into it and some more texture.
i think the composition in the 2nd sketch is working better than in the 1st; while on the 1st it looks more like hills on the second they look like dunes, also the way the 'imaginary' path made by the top of the dune, gives a better sense of depth.
ReplyDeleteyeh that 2nd sketch was the last one I did over all and I preffered it because it looked alot more 3d and not flat. thanks ^_^ I might just go back and work on that sketch
ReplyDeleteA clarification; Alan WON"T be looking at students' Maya work until Monday of next week, which means you have the weekend to complete your various exercises. I know Alan has spoken with the class about this already - so I'm just confirming it from an assessment point of view. I'll do my best to post this message on everyone's blog, but if you could spread the word, I'd be grateful. Cheers!
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